Today I
will write about a special place to me in Santiago. This special place is the
Quinta Normal Park. Well, to start, is my favourite place in Santiago for its beauty and
nature. There is an amazing quantity of trees, above 4,200 trees, of several
species, that by age and great height are the protagonists in the park.
The second
reason, in addition to nature, is the awesome quantity of places to develop
the culture, some examples are the National Museum of Natural History,
Science and Technology Museum, Contemporary Art Museum
and a lot of activities on the weekends.
Finally,
and one of the most important reason, there I met with my actual girlfriend the
first time. It was in the summer of this year, and she looked very beautiful.
So, in
conclusion, all these reasons make me say that the Quinta Normal is my favorite place in
Santiago 
Hello James! I also know that park. I find it a very good place to visit and with more reason if you go with your beloved, sir Carbonelson jaja
ResponderEliminarI see you in another life brother
Oh that is a great place. You must know the Parque delos Reyes, It´s near to the Quinta Normal.
ResponderEliminarI like the Science and Technology Museum because It´s like a poor MIM
Jaime,
ResponderEliminarTS: Today I will write about a special place to me in Santiago. This special place is the Quinta Normal Park.
A TOPIC SENTENCE NEEDS A TOPIC + A CONTROLLING IDEA. DO NOT ANNOUNCE WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO SAY. YOU SAY "ONE OF MY FAVOURITE PLACES IN SANTIAGO IS QUINTA NORMAL", WHERE THE TOPIC IS "QUINTA NORMAL" AND THE CONTROLLING IDEA IS : "IT IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE PLACES/TI IS MY FAVOURITE PLACE IN SANTIAGO"
SS1: Well, to start, IT (NEVER OMIT THE SUBJECT!!!) is my favourite place in Santiago for its beauty and nature.
EXP.:There is an amazing quantity of trees, above 4,200 trees, of several species, that by age and great height are the protagonists in the park. (GOOD EXPLANATION)
SS2: The second reason, in addition to nature, is the awesome quantity of places to develop [the] culture,
EX: some examples are the National Museum of Natural History, Science and Technology Museum, Contemporary Art Museum and a lot of activities on the weekends.
SS3: Finally, and one of the most important reason, there I met with my actual girlfriend the first time.
EXP: It was in the summer of this year, and she looked very beautiful.
C: So, in conclusion, all these reasons make me say that the Quinta Normal is my favorite place in Santiago
SO YOUR STRUCTURE IS VERY GOOD, BE CAREFUL WITH THE TOPIC SENTENCE AND THAT'S IT!!